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Anyone here writes poems, wanna share or even compete?? post up here please!

**here's one I wrote:

Talk To Me

Hold on to me
Look closely…
Don’t drift away
Don’t leave me here
Out on a limb
Don’t take it in your stride…
It was a mishap
I didn’t mean to hurt you….
I didn’t mean the words I said
Be lenient…
Look into my eyes
Hold on to me
Lean on me
Talk to me
Let me know
Everything you wanna say
Spell out what’s
In you heart strings
Unleash those words
Let go off, the things I said
Look into my eyes
Hear me talking
I’ll give you a leg-up
I’ll stand by you
When you’re all alone
Look back…
I’ll be there for you
It’s hurting me
Seeing you sad
It’s hurting me
Looking into those
Sad tearful eyes…
Everything is moving
While I’m frozen in a
Moment of mishap…
Let me talk to you
I’m not so good with words
But, I’ll try to show you
That we belong together
Look into my eyes
Hear me talking
Hear the sound of my heart
Be lenient…
I didn’t mean the words I said
Hold on to me
Lean on me
Trust in me
Let me hold you
Don’t leave me here
Out on a limb
Talk to me…
Unleash those words…
I can be everything
You want me to be.

Hey

I only like the last two sentences


I can be everything
You want me to be.

Be my guest for one night

HP wrote:Hey

I only like the last two sentences


I can be everything
You want me to be.

Be my guest for one night

Two sentences you'll never hear from anything that stands upright and walks the Earth, HP..................well, unless you are prepared to pay.............hope, you've got a plantinum c/card.

GAB wrote:

HP wrote:Hey

I only like the last two sentences


I can be everything
You want me to be.

Be my guest for one night

Two sentences you'll never hear from anything that stands upright and walks the Earth, HP..................well, unless you are prepared to pay.............hope, you've got a plantinum c/card.

Why the heck no one said "

well said GAB" Or " i am agree with GAB"

where are arnie , Fayz and crew .............come and say it

GAB;

E.Jewel will say it

And the violins play........................eek eek eek!!

I'm confused hahaha, thnx for the comments anyway!!!!!

have a couple of poems i wanna share..although they sound better on my guitar.

Such a Fool

My loss will have you suffocate
your heart for me to allocate
I was your dependent addiction
I caused this internal contradiction

Don’t fool yourself, you can never move along
I’ll be haunting every dream and nightmare you got
Don’t try to convince yourself that what we had was wrong
You know it more than I do, without it your soul would rot

You think it all ended last night
Believing it’ll do us both good
Stop hiding behind your degrading fright
We both know it’s just a momentary lost of sight

Stop hiding away, like a frightened child
Stop running away, escaping to your world of trance
Halt and realize what you could find
If you gave it all another chance

Did you think I would cry for you over the phone?
Beg you to not leave me behind all alone?
If you did, you’re even more foolish than I thought
This is a lost deal you just bought

the other one is...which is a very recent one...

A Kid with a Paper Bag on her Head

Neurotic, persistent phobic
With dreams about something horrific
A kid with a paper bag on her head
A kid curled all day in bed

Day and day, pass by
Sorrow and pity, shimmer from her eyes
Repulsed by the stench of atrocity
Lives by her own eccentric philosophy

A kid with a paper bag on her head
A kid curled all day in bed
A kid that keeps the boogeyman within fed
with the world’s own narcissism that’s tinted with red

a kid that goes wild and paints the city blue
a kid that’s terrified from the heavens crimson hue
a kid that keeps a storm in her pocket
escapes the world with a shining rocket

a kid that is always late
even for her own fate
begs for her lover to go faster
ditches him behind for another bastard

a kid who always find someone new
to hurt, and leave behind as she flew
searching for another dismal soul
to feed on everything that’s foul

a kid who will always be a sinner
mistaken herself for a champ winner
a kid with a paper bag on her head
a kid curled all day in bed


P.S: please tell me what you think.

brutal-romance wrote:have a couple of poems i wanna share..although they sound better on my guitar.

Such a Fool

My loss will have you suffocate
your heart for me to allocate
I was your dependent addiction
I caused this internal contradiction

Don’t fool yourself, you can never move along
I’ll be haunting every dream and nightmare you got
Don’t try to convince yourself that what we had was wrong
You know it more than I do, without it your soul would rot

You think it all ended last night
Believing it’ll do us both good
Stop hiding behind your degrading fright
We both know it’s just a momentary lost of sight

Stop hiding away, like a frightened child
Stop running away, escaping to your world of trance
Halt and realize what you could find
If you gave it all another chance

Did you think I would cry for you over the phone?
Beg you to not leave me behind all alone?
If you did, you’re even more foolish than I thought
This is a lost deal you just bought

the other one is...which is a very recent one...

A Kid with a Paper Bag on her Head

Neurotic, persistent phobic
With dreams about something horrific
A kid with a paper bag on her head
A kid curled all day in bed

Day and day, pass by
Sorrow and pity, shimmer from her eyes
Repulsed by the stench of atrocity
Lives by her own eccentric philosophy

A kid with a paper bag on her head
A kid curled all day in bed
A kid that keeps the boogeyman within fed
with the world’s own narcissism that’s tinted with red

a kid that goes wild and paints the city blue
a kid that’s terrified from the heavens crimson hue
a kid that keeps a storm in her pocket
escapes the world with a shining rocket

a kid that is always late
even for her own fate
begs for her lover to go faster
ditches him behind for another bastard

a kid who always find someone new
to hurt, and leave behind as she flew
searching for another dismal soul
to feed on everything that’s foul

a kid who will always be a sinner
mistaken herself for a champ winner
a kid with a paper bag on her head
a kid curled all day in bed


P.S: please tell me what you think.

HeLLOoo you, aren't u someone I know... pardon me just online
somewhere I do ... right... u & the devilish angel r frnds yeah?????

brutal-romance, good poems.. DON'T stop

This one's by Wordsworth... I just wanted to share...

She was a Phantom of Delight
by: William Wordsworth


SHE was a Phantom of delight
When first she gleam'd upon my sight;
A lovely Apparition, sent
To be a moment's ornament:
Her eyes as stars of twilight fair; 5
Like twilight's, too, her dusky hair;
But all things else about her drawn
From May-time and the cheerful dawn;
A dancing shape, an image gay,
To haunt, to startle, and waylay. 10

I saw her upon nearer view,
A Spirit, yet a Woman too!
Her household motions light and free,
And steps of virgin liberty;
A countenance in which did meet 15
Sweet records, promises as sweet;
A creature not too bright or good
For human nature's daily food,
For transient sorrows, simple wiles,
Praise, blame, love, kisses, tears, and smiles. 20

And now I see with eye serene
The very pulse of the machine;
A being breathing thoughtful breath,
A traveller between life and death:
The reason firm, the temperate will, 25
Endurance, foresight, strength, and skill;
A perfect Woman, nobly plann'd
To warn, to comfort, and command;
And yet a Spirit still, and bright
With something of an angel light.

Excuse me if i touch the sky

smoking weed and getting high

if u smell my breath u gonna die

and dnt blam me im just a guy

naruto wrote:Excuse me if i touch the sky

smoking weed and getting high

if u smell my breath u gonna die

and dnt blam me im just a guy

gawd gawd

Virgin eyes
the black laugh silenced her
Her senses fading
Mercy by violence
the love ending
His crime was desire

EVERYBODY

IF YOU DON'T SPEAK

EVERYBODY IS OVERSENSITIVE

IF YOU SPEAK

EVERYBODY IS DEAF....

IF YOU GIVE UP FROM TELLING

OR TRYING TO BE UNDERSTOOD,

IF YOU COVER YOUR SENSES,

A BLIND DARKNESS COMES ONTO YOU

SLOWLY....

AND THE ONLY THING THAT YOU CAN FEEL

IS YOUR LONELINESS....



IF YOU FED UP WITH SILENCE,

AND RUN INTO THE CROWD....

YOUR LONELINESS INCREASES

INSTEAD OF DECREASING.

IT IS WORSE THAN BEFORE NOW

AND BECOMES HEAVIER....



IF YOU GO EVERYBODY IS KNOWN,

IF YOU STAY EVERYBODY IS STRANGER....

IS IT THE TASTE OF ABOUT TO BE CRAZY?

IF YOU DON'T SPEAK

EVERYBODY IS OVERSENSITIVE....

IF YOU SPEAK

EVERYBODY IS DEAF....

Someday u may lose ur hair.
u may lose ur teeth- ur money & even lose ur mind.
But 1 thing u will never loose is ur good looks.
coz u cant lose wot u don't have!

I see your face when I am dreaming
That's why I always wake up screaming

10 THINGS I HATE ABOUT my girlfriend:




I hate you every time a day passed without a text from you,
The feeling of a dark and gloomy day I have to go through…

I hate you every time I see you close to another guy,
Feels like my heart can’t help but cry…

I hate you every time I’m with you and you remain silent,
Feels like I’m going through a series of punishment…

I hate you every time you keep secrets from me,
Feels like even our friendship is not meant to be….

I hate you every time you tell me to go away,
Feels like I’m the saddest part of your day…

I hate you every time you got angry because of my suggestion,
Feels like I’m the biggest obstacle in your clear direction…..

I hate you every time when you accuse, taunt and be mean to me
Feels like you like doing this to me…

I hate you every time you make me feel so unimportant,
Feels like the care you’d given before are all with hesitant…

I hate you for making me fall so deep,
Feels like I’m just been taken for a trip…

I hate you for making me believe that your love for me is true,
And now I’m left all alone with a feeling so lonely and blue

by rudeboy

Deniz wrote:I

YOU AND LOVE

ARE FALLEN INTO A RIVER OF TIME

LIKE A LITTLE STONE...

LOVE IS STANDING STILL

BUT THE TIME IS

STILL DRAGGING US ON.

IT IS CLEAR THAT

LOVE IS HEAVIER THAN

TWO OF US!...

nice guys..but i liked this one a lot

Love and Friendship

Love is like the wild rose-briar,
Friendship like the holly-tree
The holly is dark when the rose-briar blooms
But which will bloom most contantly?
The wild-rose briar is sweet in the spring,
Its summer blossoms scent the air;
Yet wait till winter comes again
And who wil call the wild-briar fair?
Then scorn the silly rose-wreath now
And deck thee with the holly's sheen,
That when December blights thy brow
He may still leave thy garland green.Emily Jane Bronte

by Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806-1861)

Go from me. Yet I feel that I shall stand
Henceforward in thy shadow. Nevermore
Alone upon the threshold of my door
Of individual life, I shall command
The uses of my soul, nor lift my hand
Serenely in the sunshine as before,
Without the sense of that which I forebore---
Thy touch upon the palm. The widest land
Doom takes to part us, leaves thy heart in mine
With pulses that beat double. What I do
And what I dream include thee, as the wine
Must taste of its own grapes. And when I sue
God for myself, He hears that name of thine,
And sees within my eyes the tears of two.

Nice One Deniz, thnx for sharin ^^
I like the very last one, u repeated the post more than Once

Read this One, I wrote it ^^

Do you want to


Do you want to
Become a complete moron?
Do you want to
Feel so pathetic?
Do you want to
Feel like you’re the dumbest
Person on earth?
Do you want to
Act like a fool?
Do you want to
Become a different person
That is so not you?
Do you want to
Get tongue-tied
And blabber like a schmuck?
In short do you want to become a fool
Just fall in love!

©2006 ~Sara

where is intimacy??? this is his forte!!!