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Nice poem but too long to read

he's got a creative hand in doing that...

You're tired before you're done reading...sighhh

Oye YOU TOSSER !!!!
Your poetry sucks. You have no rhythm nor rhyme
Stop ripping off the song Lovin' You by Minnie Riperton
I would strongly advise any female dating u to leave you. Infact after a while they did do it on their own accord !
you my bleedin' love, tw*t of an Indian Romeo, must die....

creative_tiger wrote:Loving you
It's like feeling soft soft rain
Fall on my face

Loving you
It's the comfort of my
Heart

Loving you
Makes me laugh and smile at the same time
It makes my heart warm, it gives me life

Loving you
It's all very new to me
It's very good

Loving you
To feel your hand in mine
To feel your breath slide along the side of my cheek
To feel your heart pounding beneath my ear
As I rest my head upon your chest

Loving you
So many words to describe it
Yet so few

Loving you
I want to take care of you
As you take care of me
I want to hear your troubles and your joys
I want to encourage you
As you choose to follow life

Loving you
It is an honor to be trusted so
With your deepest, darkest worries
Secrets
With your most heart felt
Dreams

Loving you
Sharing little moments with you
Looking into one another's hearts
Reading each other's souls
Loving me

Loving you
There is nothing else I want
But to be held by you

Loving you
It is such a rarity to find
It is such a blessing to do
It is such an inspiration
It is such a dream come true

Loving you
It is not sheer perfection
Despite what you may want to hear
It is Love
It is right
No matter what you may do
Or how upset we may get
Our love will win
It will bring us back

Loving you
Needing you
Wanting you
You, you

Loving you

the guys in LUVVVVV

creative_tiger wrote:Loving you
It's like feeling soft soft rain
Fall on my face

Loving you
It's the comfort of my
Heart

Loving you
Makes me laugh and smile at the same time
It makes my heart warm, it gives me life

Loving you
It's all very new to me
It's very good

Loving you
To feel your hand in mine
To feel your breath slide along the side of my cheek
To feel your heart pounding beneath my ear
As I rest my head upon your chest

Loving you
So many words to describe it
Yet so few

Loving you
I want to take care of you
As you take care of me
I want to hear your troubles and your joys
I want to encourage you
As you choose to follow life

Loving you
It is an honor to be trusted so
With your deepest, darkest worries
Secrets
With your most heart felt
Dreams

Loving you
Sharing little moments with you
Looking into one another's hearts
Reading each other's souls
Loving me

Loving you
There is nothing else I want
But to be held by you

Loving you
It is such a rarity to find
It is such a blessing to do
It is such an inspiration
It is such a dream come true

Loving you
It is not sheer perfection
Despite what you may want to hear
It is Love
It is right
No matter what you may do
Or how upset we may get
Our love will win
It will bring us back

Loving you
Needing you
Wanting you
You, you

Loving you

Are you a bandit?

very nice poem

This is a very touchable poem. I hope every one like it.

Untamed lover in the night (by Speedhump)

Sun drops fast from cloudless sky.
My heart beats fast, the time is nigh!
I climb like leopard, scaling wall,
I hear your cry, animal call.
At last I'm in, I find you there.
I run my fingers through your hair.
Your skin is striped, your nose is long.
My Zebra friend, your smell is strong!
I'll take you now, although you'll fight,
my untamed lover in the night..........

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