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many a distant land. She searches near and far, yet finds nothing. Despair begins to creep in. One autumn evening as Zaza was flying around on her broomstick, she notices a handsome young man, gardening below. Zara was captivated. She felt a tingling sensation of longing .....Crash....Zaza flies straight into a branch and falls of her broomstick......

she was saved by a caring peasant couple...

young man tito says: r u ok o beautiful lady? then zaza says:...

Just as Zaza was about to say something, she remembers her curse. All her lovers.....

would turn to...

bats when the dark falls; while the little witch would turn into a jade statue during day time, once she's in love. In this case, the curse will part them forever, as only one of them can be human...

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WhiteJade wrote:bats when the dark falls; while the little witch would turn into a jade statue during day time, once she's in love. In this case, the curse will part them forever, as only one of them can be human...

and the other will be.....

sage & onion wrote:and the other will be.....

Pls read my works again, Sage

WhiteJade wrote:

sage & onion wrote:and the other will be.....

Pls read my works again, Sage

Please continue the story WJ

sage & onion wrote:and the other will be.....

a bat(at night) or a jade statue(during day time)---ref. my post before last one.

The little witch has been staying with the loving peasants couple for quite a long time now, hiding carefully the woodman's heart and a drop of blood extracted from those boys' blood she's been collecting so far well from the affectionate old couple, looking for the third and last substance for the making of her transformation fluid.

All seems going well except the only problem. She has no idea at all, what this substance is...

At the urge of being a human being, the little witch made her adieu to the peasants couple and went on searching...

...for her mentor "Igor of the east". "perhaps he can help me in my quest" she thought to herself as she hovered over the angkor thom temple. he finally appeared walking towards the holy mastaba so she...

secretly followed him...

to a place unknown to any living person, in the hope that......

she would find the last substance for her transformation fluid.

So desperately did the little witch want to transform into a mortal that she would do anything told by her mentor.

Deep in the woods on Island Unigzizd, Lily(the renamed little witch) followed her mentor to an open place beside an old pear tree. She was surprised to find there already a fire lit on the ground and the mentor, was actually blind.

He was sitting beside the fire, with his face facing towards where Lily was standing as if he had his eyes rested on her. 'Lily, your mother was an old friend,' he started to talk, 'I knew you since long before. Now come, near to me.'

Having not given it a thought, Lily went to him. She saw a jade dagger held in his hands, shinning with a gender glow.

'Undress yourself,' he said. She did so.

'Now cut your left chest open.' He handed the dagger over to her.

She hesitated but still she pointed the knife towards her chest and, slowly the blade sinked into her skin.

She was so surprised however that she felt no pain and that their was very little blood, she reached the area of her heart and suddenly.......

she screamed out of scare.

She saw no heart there inside...

It indeed was a frightening moment until she realized that her Mentor had her heart and was....

burning it. It burnt and burnt, and burnt till nothing was left.

'Wooden hearts are not for humans Lily,' he said, 'the heart you had, was a wooden one.'

And suddenly he produced a live heart and proceeded to introduce the organ into her chest cavity, she couldn't believe that through all of this she was still conscious, and then suddenly the door burst open and.......

Lily felt a ghostly breeze...

as the image of......

her one and only true love...

Roadtester wrote:her one and only true love...

Hey RT, no one can love with a wooden heart. Mind the consistency please.

As a loyal contributor to this thread I require you get it back on track

WhiteJade wrote:

Roadtester wrote:her one and only true love...

Hey RT, no one can love with a wooden heart. Mind the consistency please.

As a loyal contributor to this thread I require you get it back on track

sorry whitejade had interpreted it bit different, in my mind the heart had been put in, she felt a breeze and it was someone else appearing.

i'll dip again later

WhiteJade wrote:

Roadtester wrote:her one and only true love...

Hey RT, no one can love with a wooden heart. Mind the consistency please.

As a loyal contributor to this thread I require you get it back on track

Hey WJ, I think if you look back you will find that a live heart had been introduced.

sage & onion wrote:Hey WJ, I think if you look back you will find that a live heart had been introduced.

Timetable:

when she had a wood heart > the moment she's given a live heart > next second she felt the ghost of her one and only love ???

If you think one second would be enough to fall in love...

then we must all believe in miracles as the....

sun also rises...